Monday, June 28, 2010

Monday's Child - 1















Mr. Rabbit
Has a habit
Of tender carrots stealing

Mr. Squirrel
His tail unfurled
Objects to this with feeling

Mr. Crow
And Mrs. Crow
Look on with obvious longing

Miss Sweet Robin
Head a bobbin’
Resumes melodious songing


Mr. Farmer
And Mrs. Farmer
Welcome them all with grace

One and All
In Earth’s Grand Hall
They each have found their place

~JCM





Hello All.
I was invited to join a new writing group for children over at http://childrensverse.blogspot.com/


There will be a prompt of some sort and then you write a short verse or story. This weeks' prompt was the lovely picture above, so I wrote a little poem to go along with it.

If you are interested in joining this group please do click on the link above and check it out. It promises to be great fun!

Smiles

16 comments:

signed...bkm said...

Beautiful Julia, love it all and "Miss Sweet Robin Head a bobbin'...." You are a gem for supporting and get the word out....blessings..bkm

lissa said...

sweet mini-tale and I like the names you have chosen - all so polite and proper - very delightful

I might even try this new prompt

Julia Christie said...

Oh Lissa I hope you do! You would be so great at this!

Short Poems said...

Nicely written, enjoyed it :)

Jingle said...

cute!

Heather said...

Julia, this is GREAT! I am so excited to see what you do with children's stories!!!

...How do they pick the artwork?

:) Heather

Kristin said...

Oh, my goodness! WHAT a cool piece! I LOVE what you have written and will check it out myself - I am so intrigued!
Your poem is so tender and I love the last verse especially,
Kristin xo
BTW, that must be a real challenge - to create something off of a picture!

Tammie said...

how wonderful that you did this prompt. I love what you did with it and so perfect that you have children to share it with. Fun!

faerwillow said...

~this is ever so sweet and such an creative way to keep the words flowing! thank you for sharing with us this...look forward to joing along...warm wishes and brightest blessings~

Kristin said...

Hi again!
Okay, so I gave it a try - I was so inspired by you. Unfortunately, I was unable to link my site to the original challenge. Any suggestions? BTW, I bragged about you below my submission. I think that you are a tremendous talent,
Kristin xo

Julia Christie said...

Kristin you are too sweet! That's funny, because I am always in awe of your creativity when I visit your place!

Smiles my dear

Julia Christie said...

Thanks to tammie and faerwillow for your nice comments too. You are all so wonderfully supportive as I try new ventures!

:-)

Creative Carmelina said...

this is cute Julia!
i usually love joining things like this, sounds like fun and my 'cup of tea' but really I mean coffee! heheee...

my hubby and kids are now on vacation...and I find blogging and creating enough of a challenge with everyone around as it is! lol

but maybe!

well done on your poetic expression....i just love a good writing prompt!

ciao bella
creative carmelina

Amalia K said...

You are so full of love and talent, Julia. Such a rare mix, indeed. Not to mention your natural motherly wisdom... Oh, I have a lot to learn from you! :)) oxx

Sophia said...

I love it Julia! I am looking forward to reading what you create/write each time. :)

Millie said...

Oh Julia, this is sooo sweet! You brought those little creatures & Mr. & Mrs. Farmer to life so perfectly.
Millie ^_^